Better to end it tonight

[Awaiting Icarus]

A night, in a stir
What did i witness
What a disasterous act
Ignorance is bliss
But what makes
For a more perfect night
What a dreadful life
What a perfect night

And so i Found
The blood on my hands
Was my own
Thoughts of a life unfold
As I end myself tonight
Better to end it tonight

At the end of the road
I see a man all in black
A twisted distorted face he wears
With a tie of blood
He kisses me tenderly
And takes my hand
And pulls me into the darkness
From which I am never to return
Never to breathe again
Never to live again

And so i Found
The blood on my hands
Was my own
Thoughts of a life unfold
As I end myself tonight
Better to end it tonight

I know it's too late to take it back
But i wish for it
As I fade away
Into dark nights fading
Never to live again

 

[Lalaith]

*passes out*... sorry, needed to say that...

Because it's beautiful in a sad way. i like it a lot but it makes me feel sad too.

But thise are the best poems ^^.

 

[The True Keyblader]

yep this is good you have alot of talent your poem rock big tyme

 

[Awaiting Icarus]

Thanx for the comments...
I just read this poem again..
it blew me away that such poetry radiates from me...
I really love this poem...
especially


'I know it's too late to take it back
But i wish for it
As I fade away
Into dark nights fading
Never to live again'