Constant Heartache

[Awaiting Icarus]

Only through constant heartache
Heartbreak
Do I truly realize
I’m alive
But what do I do
When I become too attached to you?

Through our constant heartache
Heartbreak
I truly comprehend
That I am dead

This lifeless shell
With these eyes of grey
With their comatose sentiment
I can only take so much
Until my body breaks

See me breathing
Hear me screaming
Feel me pushing
Watch me dying

 

[Lalaith]

Aww, I agree with you. I love this poem, it's so wonderfully sad.

I think it's my favourite.

 

[The True Keyblader]

i like it it sad but good these kind of poems

 

[Daemon Sadi]

Emo. . . . *yawn*

 

[Awaiting Icarus]

Whatever Zidarri...
'tis not emo...

 

[Daemon Sadi]

It is, too. So emo.

 

[Awaiting Icarus]

No it isn't...
Just creative...
So shut up..

 

[Daemon Sadi]

It's emo. Deal with it. I never said it sucked.

 

[Lalaith]

*appears out of nowhere*

Umm, is that really important, guys?

What really matters is that it is great. You know it's amazing Tsukie; Josh thinks it's great as well.

And most importatntly I think it's great, lol (ignore this last line, my opinion doesn't count right now, haha)

So, I say... end of story and I win... where's my prize ^.^

PS. You two go check my poem, lol.