Dance of the midnight hour

[Jing]

Will you listen closely please
For i intend your tears to freeze
Your crying will not bring you pain
Nor shall it all but leave a stain

I only wish for you to smile
I promise i shall not be vile
so long you promise me one thing
No matter what the price may bring

It is your soul i wish to take
Your mindless body left in wake
To dance the twilight with your aid
This offer is what i have made

We will dance the dark
And leave our mark
And nothing will stand in our way

This all can be yours
If you'll leave these shores
And return to meet me some day

 

[Eternally Yours]

I love it. This is my all time favorite from you. ^^ It's so great. I loved the whole thing. Don't show your lit teacher this one she may rape you..XD

 

[Lalaith]

I So agree!!!!!!

This is brilliant, wonderful, amazing... Perfect. I had to choose a fav and I just chose it. I love it endlessly. I can't even put in words what I think about this poem. It's just... amazing. And somehow I'm no longer sad. ^^.

I think I can't choose my fav lines because I love everything. I don't know what else to say because I'm speechless.

I loved it.