Disposition

[Jing]

Do you even understand
Whats going on with me
Do you really even care
whats really wrong with me

Because I don't need you now
I don't want you here
And I don't see you somehow
And yet I have no fear

When will you realize
That what is wrong
Is not here in my eyes
But i know It's out there somewhere

And when will you stop the lies
And tell the truth
The truth that you now hide
Revealing it for all the world to see

Please help me spread the truth
Please help i'm saving you
Why wont you just let go and Breath

Can't you see there's something wrong here
With all this pain that's going on here
Won't you stop and let your self go
For now

Just let yourself go for now...

 

[Lalaith]

I'm impressed, once again. How can you write poems so fast and so nicelly? Give me half of your talent ^^.

I loved it, it's great!!!

I think you could write just one line, and it'd still be a wonderful poem. And I'm not just saying it, I really mean it.