I've been working on this for quite some time now. I kept on starting over because I couldn't figure out how to conect my starting with what I wanted to put in later. I think I finally got it now. Here it is...
Elemental Order
Chapter 1
The night was cold and bright. The wind blew through the trees violently. The ground was covered with cold dew. The middle of autumn and the grass was still pure green. Different colored leaves falling to the ground forming pile at the foot of the tree. The leaves then rustled quickly and jumped into the air. A man had ran threw them with a great speed. Not but a few seconds later the leaves flew into the air again.
It was some sort of beast running after that man. It was the size of a horse with the characteristics of a dog and a boar. The tusks of the animal were long and sharp. It was big and hairy from its head to its tail. It had been chasing the man through the forest for some time. There was a creature riding on top of the dog-like beast. It was tall and was cloaked in torn black clothes. Its sword drawn looking like it had been in many battles.
The man came into an opening in the forest. In the middle of it was a hill. On top of this hill was a small cottage. He quickly started to run up to it. He reached the door and pounded eagerly on it. A man was inside sitting by his fireplace. He looked over at his door with a disturbed look on his face. He rushes to the door. The door is flung open only to reveal the terrible that has happened. Rokou was staring death in the face. He fell down without moving his eyes from that spot. The man who had been pounding on the door was gone. Only one thing that proved he existed was there. His head was driven on a pike and stabbed through the rock path. Blood slowly dripped from his neck to form a puddle at the bottom of the pike.
Rokou’s eyes widened with fear at the site of what stood behind the severed head. The beast was standing there eating the corpse while the rider looked at Rokou. He got off his horse and walked toward Rokou. He reached out about reading to grab him. Rokou blacked out and knew nothing about what happened next.
Morning came and Rokou woke with a quit jolt. He looked around only seeing his house and a closed door. He slowly got up and reached for the knob. The door gently came open to show nothing there. Was it only a bad dream? He thought to himself. He looked down to see the dried up pool of blood. He looked around outside. Nothing.
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Elemental Order
Chapter 1
The night was cold and bright. The wind blew through the trees violently. The ground was covered with cold dew. The middle of autumn and the grass was still pure green. Different colored leaves falling to the ground forming pile at the foot of the tree. The leaves then rustled quickly and jumped into the air. A man had ran threw them with a great speed. Not but a few seconds later the leaves flew into the air again.
It was some sort of beast running after that man. It was the size of a horse with the characteristics of a dog and a boar. The tusks of the animal were long and sharp. It was big and hairy from its head to its tail. It had been chasing the man through the forest for some time. There was a creature riding on top of the dog-like beast. It was tall and was cloaked in torn black clothes. Its sword drawn looking like it had been in many battles.
The man came into an opening in the forest. In the middle of it was a hill. On top of this hill was a small cottage. He quickly started to run up to it. He reached the door and pounded eagerly on it. A man was inside sitting by his fireplace. He looked over at his door with a disturbed look on his face. He rushes to the door. The door is flung open only to reveal the terrible that has happened. Rokou was staring death in the face. He fell down without moving his eyes from that spot. The man who had been pounding on the door was gone. Only one thing that proved he existed was there. His head was driven on a pike and stabbed through the rock path. Blood slowly dripped from his neck to form a puddle at the bottom of the pike.
Rokou’s eyes widened with fear at the site of what stood behind the severed head. The beast was standing there eating the corpse while the rider looked at Rokou. He got off his horse and walked toward Rokou. He reached out about reading to grab him. Rokou blacked out and knew nothing about what happened next.
Morning came and Rokou woke with a quit jolt. He looked around only seeing his house and a closed door. He slowly got up and reached for the knob. The door gently came open to show nothing there. Was it only a bad dream? He thought to himself. He looked down to see the dried up pool of blood. He looked around outside. Nothing.
Post what you think could help it out. Or just post what you think about it.
