Final Goodbye

[Jing]

The ringing Stinging Shallow lies
Force me now to break the ties
Turning from your forceful ways
Taking to my day of days

I never should have let you speak
The boards i walk now loudly creak
Your lying ways have made me sick
How could i even miss this trick

I have turned to go and never stay
The skies will keep forever gray
You never should have let me go
You never should have turned a foe

I only wished to see you smile
If only i had seen how vile
Maybe i could save you too
Only if i saved a few

I will be away for good
This is the way i think i should
Miss me now for i am gone
I will rest your heart upon.

 

[Lalaith]

Awwww. How could you say this is not good? It's wonderful. It's sad and powerful in every way.

And boy, how can you write a poem like this in 5 mins. I wish I could do that. But, then again, I rather read your poems than writting mine. ^^

And... oh, I adore the ending:

"I will be away for good
This is the way i think i should
Miss me now for i am gone
I will rest your heart upon."