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Jing

The King Of Bandits
Your screaming makes me want to cry
It's meaning makes me need to die
The sadness stained inside your lips
Piercing as your smile dips

All i asked was are you fine
But on my soul your set to dine
Stop the screaming stop the yelling
You don't know what your even telling

If only you would listen close
Lest all you do is smugly boast
I have no words for you to hear
Now i don't even need you near

You've done it now
And set your path
But yet somehow
you feel this wrath

I intended not to hurt you love
You feel as though you're from above
I only sought to show you truth
Yet there is nothing left to sooth
 

Lalaith

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Feb 13, 2007
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Zenny
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Wow...

Let me try to find something interesting to say, I think I've become repetitive.

But it's just that your poems are trully inspiring. Now on to comment this one. It's so deep and sad and wonderful at the same time.

My fav part:

"Your screaming makes me want to cry
It's meaning makes me need to die
The sadness stained inside your lips
Piercing as your smile dips"