Keyblade War: Part 1 Epilogue

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"The Leader be approaching soon." said the female knights approaching the Male knight ontop of the Gummi Ship. Her armor being made of pure iron with muscel figure build into it making her look stronger then she appeared her, helmet was also made of pure iron only it had a black visor going welded into it that she could see out of but, nobody could see in.

"How long?" Asked the Male Knight he letting his large keyblade fall from his shoulder to the gummi ships metal surface taking a few steps towards her letting sparks fly behind him. He wore similar armor to her, only it was made for a male and it was bigger. The big diffrence was on his helmet there were two shafts going from his ears to five inches in the air.

"He will be here soon! It doesn't matter how long!" Cried the female knight turning away disgusted as if he had just insulted everything she cared for in life.

The male knight stepped off the gummi ship starting down the path, sorrounded by keyblade. The female turned around and noticed him already walking she shocked for a moment but, began to walk a few feet away from him. The Male Knight's keyblade was trailing behind him in the sand leaving a trail that soon dissapeared from the wind blowing sand over it.

They approached the crossroads three keyblade sticking out in the middle of the feild. The female knight began to walk quicker to get ahead of the male as another knight came into sight. The female nodded toward him and the new male nodded back as they all approached the three keyblades.

"Are we ready?" Asked the new male his armor being the same as the other male's. Only his armor seemed to have been in more battles then the other's it being rusted and the two shafts sticking from his helmet have been cut off most likely in battle.

"With the War, we have little choice." Said the female gripping hold of the keyblade with brown flowers all around it, having color in it prime most likely but now it was rusted and old.

The two males nodded and gripped the other two keyblade. The one that was standing on the Gummi Ship before pulled his keyblade out first letting his large one fall into the sand next to him. The male looked it over, it having a very simple yellow hilt with a metal blade in the form of a key. Two words filled the knights head as he pulled it from the ground. "Kingdom Key"

The other male pulled his keyblade from the ground, it being more intresting. Having a batwing on the end of the black shaft, and since it was black didn't show the rust as must. The hilt was full of spikes pointing out of it. A name also filled his head "Way to the Dawn."

The female took a deep breath and gripped the last keyblade pulling it from the ground, it having flowers at the end for the key. She looked it over it being yellow she could just make it out from the rust and the hilt was filled with brown flowers as she had noticed before. But, when she drew it, the Keyblades name did not fill her head, instead a girl's name. "Kairi."

At the exact same moment they noticed what made these keyblades diffrent from all the other keyblade in the massive feild. These three had chains. "The Kingdom Key" had a silver mouse head dangling off its chain. "The Way to the Dawn" had a black batwing dangling from the chain. And the unamed keyblade had a poupo fruit paper figurine. They all seemed to be untouched by time being in perfect condition.

The knights then all looked up to see a glimpse of someone coming down one of the roads. He had a black cloak on and looked like he had his hood on. The cloak looked as if it was burning through the blowing sand with peices flying off then returning to the cloak. The knights all looked at eachother knowing that this must be the man, that had told them so much but they had never met. "The Leader"

To be Continued...



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Keyblade Wars
Part 2: Key

The three knights waited in a circle watching as the Leader approached he was now only a few feet from them they all tensing slightly, before relaxing they all bowing there heads to honor him he glancing to each one of them his face being hidden by a brown hood leaving only his mouth visable.

"The Keyblades... Nioez, Roldul, Alrene" "Leader" said as he took a step toward Nioez the knight that was standing on the gummi ship just minutes before he had shown up and a voice echoed through Nioez's head much like it did when he drew the "Kingdom Key" from the ground. The voice rang out "Sora" Nioez turned his head up to the Leader but, he already had his eyes adverted to the other two.

Roldul kneeled on the ground at "Leaders" feet as if to say "Im not worthy" and layed his hands on the sand keeping his eyes narrowed at the ground, he was glad that "Leader" could not s ee his face through the helmet or else he would see his scared expression. Roldul looked up at "Leader" to see a purple glowing eye staring at him from the darkness in the hood as a voice similar to the one Nioez had just heard rang out in his head. "Riku" The voice said and Roldul felt his knees weaken at the cold voice of "Leader" in his head.

Alrene took a step back from "Leader" noticing the expressions on Nioez's and Roldul's face when he looked at them and she turned her back quickly looking to the ground hoping that he would not turn her back around. After a few moments of dead silence Alrene worked up the courage to turn around to see if he was still there. She turned her head just enough over her shoulder to see behind her and spotted the purple glowing eye and a peircing sharp scream went through her head forcing her to her knees her helmet felt as if it was vibrating. This voice was not like Nioez's and Roldul's it was a scream... no... a moan. Someone moaning out the name "Kairi" the same name she had heard when she drew the new keyblade from the ground.

Alrene opened her eyes after the moan stopped and was greeted by a dark shadow casting over the feild. She quickly scrambled to her feet and looked up at the yellow sky looking around for the sun to see where it was blocked out and spotted something very strange. In the sky replacing the sun was a red heart glowing brightly casting a red tint over the entire valley. She must have not noticed from the black tint in her visor on her helmet. Shocked she quickly ran over to Nioez and Roldul before, noticing. "Leader" was gone! Dissapeared without a trace! But, there was no time to worry at this point in time.

Alrene shook Nioez and Roldul they squinting there eyes open before noticing the shadow on the ground around them and they all looked at the sky. Alrene had her eyes locked on the red heart shaped sun but, Nioez and Roldul had there eyes adverted at something else. Alrene turned her head and almost fell back onto the ground noticing a giant white cross in the sky it halfway across the heart shaped sun.

"What is that!" Roldul yelled breaking the dreaded silence, not even the wind was around them, no sand blowing over there suits of armor just silence. They all backed up slightly slightly the cross almost fully over the sun and Nioez fell to his knees he hitting his knee of something hard it making a loud clang and metal smashing together.

Nioez forced himself away from the cross and leaned very close to the sand so, he could see what was there over his black tint and the almost completely dark valley. He first noticed two bare footprints in the sand. They must have been "Leaders" all of them were wearing there armor with Iron boots.

Nioez felt the darkness come over them only a sliver of red light left in the entire valley. Nioez looked around quickly near the footprints then spotted something, it was a keyblade like the ones placed in the ground with a chain. It looked so much like the "Kingdom Key" only it had a golden blade in perfect condition instead of a rusted old silver one. Nioez reached for it before hearing a scream echo

throughout the valley quickly looking up but, saw nothing but darkness.
Nioez backed up trying to yell out Roldul's and Alrene's name but, his voice was silenced along with the whole valley. Nioez fell onto his hand and knees looking to the ground shaking slightly, the sand that usually felt soft and warm felt like cold iron and peircing glass shards. Nioez looked up to the sky, when a familiar voice echoed through his head. "Don't be afriad... Guide the key"

To be continued...

 

[Luxord92]

I already read that, but I don't understand it becuse I didn't see the secret ending!

So I'm gonna have to grade it like a teacher. 1-10 scale (including Part 2)

length- 10
quality-10
grammar- 7
Coolness-8.5

 

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You didn't read part 2! Haha, anyway I should have got a 10 for coolness! And I know my grammar sucks =D

 

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Part 4: Shattered Memory (Flashback)

“You know why I’ve asked you here Dalin.” Said an old man sitting upon a black cushion with white painted wood going down the sides of the stool. Behind the stool there was the biggest keyblade ever to be found within the field it was a shade of dark green with black crystals going down the sides of it and making up the tip of the keyblade it was named “Venomlock.”
“Yes, M’lord.. Those Black Creatures that have appeared outside the wall” Said Dalin leaning back on the his keyblade it being smaller then most, having a heart shaped black hilt with a silver blade going from the top. Dalin had coal black hair and was kept in good shape even through his old age.
“Dalin, you have been the leader of the Twilight Knights for as long as I can remember… You’ve served us well, now I ask you to fight one more battle for an old man.” Said The Lord before standing up holding onto his back as if to get some sympathy but, Dalin didn’t bite.
“I will serve you until death M’lord” Dalin said as he fell to one knee setting his keyblade down with the other hand infront of him and closing his eyes to show honor to The Lord. He rose his head up after a few moments and lifted off his knee turning to leave.
“Beware the Heartless Dalin” The Lord said as he took a step toward the door and the Lord rose grabbing onto the hilt of Venomlock to help himself to his feet and took a step down the stairs leading up to his stool.
“Heh… You’ve already got a name for those creatures, you got too much time on your hand.” He gripped his the his keyblade a bit tighter and approached the door looking back to the Lord to see a sick grin across his face and Dalin quickly exited the room.
Dalin took a deep sigh and began down the long hallway, a blue velvet carpet was going from the Lord’s room to the Knights Room. Dalin lived in a very cramped room, oh sure it was bigger then most of the Knight’s but, he lived with two other people. His wife Felyn and his son Nioez. Dalin grinned when he saw Nioez no older then three years old, running from the hall little legs carry him as fast as they could and hugged Dalin’s leg. Dalin set his rough and scarred hand upon Nioez’s head rubbing slightly before taking a step forward to the room Nioez had come from.
A beautiful woman greeted him, she had locks of dirty blonde hair wrapped around with ripped clothing going down to her stomache wearing a black dress with small blue stones at the bottom of the sleeves.
Dalin smiled warmly toward her and kissed her cheek before walking in sitting down on Nioez’s small bed and looked up to her with concern Felyn sat down on their bed and looked over to him. Nioez had found intrest in a knights with a white keyblade that he hadn’t seen before and was following him down the hall, he knew better then to go into the Lord’s room.
“I’m the leader” Mumbled Dalin as he glanced up to see if she had heard him, she cocked her head to the side with a confused face and he said it again when her eyes widened and a tear began to roll down her face.
“How could you! You promised you were done with the Twilight Knights! I’m not going to let Nioez join them!” She cried before lifting up and almost falling toward the window in tears trying to hide them from him and shook slightly in place a cold breeze running from the open window over her face.
“Nioez needs to learn to protect himself… The knights can do that! We have to think of his protection!” Nioez said with a frown across his face taking a step toward her and setting his hand on her shoulder.
“Nioez isn’t going to leave me!” Yelled Felyn when a loud gong echoed throughout both Dalin and Felyn forgot what they were saying and turned toward the Lord’s room as Nioez began to run after the running knight.
“Nioez!” Yelled Dalin pushing Felyn onto the bed and began after Nioez at full speed. Dalin panted as he chased after him sweat dripping off him and he wasn’t going fast enough to catch him, they were already too far ahead. Dalin grabbed hold of the back of his armor and ripped open the three pipes attaching it to his skin with force. Nioez threw it down revealing a white vest being ontop of a black long sleeved shirt he beginning to pick up speed as he saw them take a turn, Nioez following, follwed by Dalin.
Dalin panted and quickly pushed open the door leading to the valley looking out and was stunned, frozen in place shaking in his metal boots. Dalin was looking at the Heartless standing upon the hill of the Valley of Keyblades looking down at the palace. The gong was a warning.
Dalin quickly adverted his eyes to Nioez and saw him still following the Knight with the white keyblade, laughing his head off thinking this is a game. Dalin started toward them looking up at the swarm of Heartless being able to make the shape of Knights sticking out in the swarm.
Red bits were lifting up to the sky every second and it was only till he got closer when he noticed. They were Hearts!
“Nioez!” Yelled Dalin as a Heartless with scraggly arms and two crumpled up head pieces upon his head appeared behind Nioez. Dalin screamed at the top of his lungs and the Heartless turned quickly toward Dalin, it in one quick instant jumped toward him. Dalin swung his keyblade at the Heartless and knocked it back a few paces.
“Hide!” Yelled Dalin towards Nioez as four other Heartless’s that seemed looked like shadows a few moments ago jumped upon Dalin’s arms forcing him down to his knees he looking over toward Nioez, he hiding under a creasing in the rock and Dalin smiled slightly.
“Good… boy…” Said Dalin giving off a weak smile before turning his head slightly more and more Heartless jumping upon his body looking for something trying to turn him onto his back. Nioez saw the Twilight Knights fall one by one. It was funny, all of them thought the Keyblades found in the valley would save them against these creatures, but now that the time has come they worked no better then sticks.
Nioez couldn’t see his father anymore, he could only see the black creatures forming around him into one and a red heart lifting up into the air from the middle of the group, the Heartless all jumping back and starting toward the Knights again in one swift move.
Nioez hid there crying for hour, just crying and crying. He didn’t want to go look for his dad since he was the one that told him, when the creatures take you there is no body to see. Nioez after what seemed like days finally was able to stop crying and was greeted by silence. Nioez sniffled slightly before climbing out of the creasing in the rock looking around the valley. It was completely empty, no more white palace, no more swarm of heartless, no more nothing.
Nioez looked up to see a boy and a girl standing infront of him hugging eachother crying. Nioez took a step toward them as the girl looked toward him sniffling slightly, before tapping her friend’s shoulder and pointing out Nioez to him. They all looked at eachother for a few moments before they started toward the valley of the Keyblades without another word. Three year old Nioez and Alrene. And six year old Roldul.

To be Continued…