My many poems

[Alice]

ok, here is 2 of my many poems, which poems is all i write but anyways please review and tell what you think! ^_^
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Remembering

I try to remember-
My friends,
My family,
My love.

I try so hard,
But the memoies-
They never come back.

I still try to remember-
My friends,
My family,
My love.

I stare to the sky-
Whispering,
Please let me remember.

I still try to remember-
My family,
My friends,
My love.
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Letting Go

You try to let go of
The Pain, the sorrow

You try to cut yourself,
But you just can't.

You then just cry away,
All your pain, all your sorrow

You called me one night
To tell me you were
Going to ull the trigger.

I begged you not to do it,
But then you hung up,
And shot yourself.

You pulled that trigger,
To get away from the world.
From your pain, and your sorrow.

You were letting go,
Of you life.

I can't forgive you,
But I mourn for you.
You were my only friend,
And you just
Let go of your
Life...
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Please Review! ^_^ Hope you enjoyed! ^_^

 

[Demon_Eyes Kyo]

The were good.
I liked them ALOT
I'd never be able to do something that good.

 

[Alice]

The were good.
I liked them ALOT
I'd never be able to do something that good.

Thank you for the comment! :happy

 

[Demon_Eyes Kyo]

You're welcome

 

[Xemnas]

What about my poetry? Have you seen mine?

Yours is cool, though.

 

[Alice]

lol. thank you, i'll check it out! ^_^ Thank you again.

 

[Katsu]

this is quite good but it is very intence and deep....your a great poet