my Poetry of darkness

[Reiku Rinsagi]

These are my two poems, they come from my mindd and my heart, so don't laugh or I beat the snot out of you *glares*first one:

In the Dark Shadows

The feeling of nothing, it feels so cold
but at the same time, it's heat could melt gold
when I had nothing, I felt like no one
that my eyes weren't even meant for the sun

When it gets quiet around me, it allows me to think
when it gets too quiet, I feel that I'm going to sink
The silents can shoothe your soul and heart
other times it can just tear your mind apart

So in the shadows I wait, one side sound, one side not
and sometimes, it's not as bad as I thought
because with the shadows I am one
ready to pounce on those in the sun

and the second:

A True Shadow Heart

If you let your heart glow bright,
covered in the new days light.
Then you are the lucky one,
That shines bright in the sun.

But if you lose the light you got,
then you lay in the Shadow Heart.
the place were your soul will stay,
not even able to get away.

So know what you do, and know who you're with,
and aways stay alert
Cause the Shadow Heart will aways be there,
and it will aways hurt

 

[Reiku Rinsagi]

this is the last one, which was made under...quite disturbing circumstances

Eternal Sleep

The Shadow's nest, it reaches out
to final come and claim you
Accepting without any thoughts
You Lay and let sleep come true

Your heart it knows, that you willl spend
you life in this sleep that'll never end
Though this is not the problem you see
It another thought comes to thee

Your loved ones who held you close
you friend who you knew that you would keep
Are there to sadly see you off
on your way to your eternal sleep

 

[Lalaith]

Gosh, they are so good, it's difficult to pick a fav. I think it'll have to be between the first and the third because they are so sad and dark. I don't know what made you write "Eternal Sleep" but I guess it was really a bad moment, I'm sorry. But you wrote a really good poem.