Nevermore

[Awaiting Icarus]

I will take the full pain of your afflictions
Will you try to change your ways?
Burning through the twilight
As your soul I desperately try to save

As I pace the empty void of my mind
I wonder, question even
Can I bear your anguish or will me the shadows bind?

Just leave me bleeding on the floor
As these tears of sorrow rip their course from my eyes
Falling onto your awful depressing silhouette
I want to help you
But when questioned of your life you only answer
Nevermore

Will you take the full pain of my afflictions?
I will try to change my ways
Burning through the twilight
As my soul you desperately try to save

Nevermore

 

[The True Keyblader]

tight poem this was very good me like it

keep writing more so i can read more of your work

 

[Lalaith]

Wow... *long pause* I mean... wow...

This is not good... it's awesome. I love it so much. Especially the ending. Oh, it's so perfect Tsukie!!!

You'll get a Hug for this ^_^ :huggle

 

[Awaiting Icarus]

Thanx for the comments....
your comments encourage my writings