Psychological manslaughter

[Jing]

The bloody drops of moisture
Dripping from the Sharpened knife
Signaling the final ending
To your bloody life

Your body falling to the ground
It's liquid spilling out
The only thing that i don't know
Is plaguing me with doubt

Have i brought your final blow
And taken all you had
Have i really took your life
And left them feeling sad

I hope to god you don't awake
Though i am not afraid
For if you were to wake from death
You'll wish you would have stayed

I have taken all you had to give
And watched you while you bled
Then slowly walked away from you
Knowing you were dead

 

[Lalaith]

That's what I call talent. How could you write a masterpiece in five minutes? Tell me the secret. It takes me ages to write something decent.

And wow, this goes to my favs, I think I have two or three already. It's splendid in all senses, you didn't lie, you were trully inspired.

And that's exactely the kind of poem I love to read. It's so full of meaning... I can't explain.

"hope to god you don't awake
Though i am not afraid
For if you were to wake from death
You'll wish you would have stayed"

Brilliant!!!!