Remix the song

[Daesy]

Alright for all those who love music this is a contest of who's lyrical remix is better. It can be rap, rock, even country.

To start off this is the video:YouTube - Touch It Remix

Here is my remix:

"Touch it - bring it - babe - watch it -
turn it - leave it - stop - format it"

Get low Dae:
Who be da the Queen of the town
Nitz Nyte and Lai be with me on the prowl
Messin around, and we always kool
Trying to see what trouble we get into

Turn it up:
Now you kno what's down what be on street
Bow to me, pray to me, and remember the beat
Respect me and I will give you ya space
If ya dont imma have leave foot prints on ya face

Get low Dae:
I be at gamerz place
We be calm, can you here that bass
Be cool and bring friends just to relax
Don't worry about it there is no tax

Turn it up:
Better not be an asshole and make ppl mad
Or you'll get banned and that's too bad
And then when its over and you finish this
You be on yo back lookin up at Nitz


"Touch it - bring it - babe - watch it -
turn it - leave it - stop - format it"

 

[Nyte]

Remix "Toiuch it"

Get Low Nyte:
Ayo, I'm changein' the game.
Let me light up the mic and put ya lyrics to shame.
When the critics is rippin' ya wit "What ya spittin' is lame"
You can picka fight with Nyte, cuz I'm the ****a to blame.

Turn it up!:
But don't be steppin' to a ****a when I'm out in the street!
Cuz ya boy is rollin' deep and I'm packin' the heat.
Just gimma a pen and pad, keep playin' the beat.
Or get a lesson from my "style", but that shit isn't "Free".

Get Low Nyte:
Yo Dae let em' know that I'm fly
Me and you been rippin' it since 2005
If you hataz didn't know you better open yur eyes
Or I can slip int he clips and let you in on a suprise.

Turn it up!:
If you don't want any trouble better stay out my face.
Me and my ****az will set it off and spray up ya place.
I'm a dirty mutha****a, cuz I'm from the south
So stay the **** out my face and keep my name out ya mouth!

 

[Daesy]

Get Low Dae
Its unbelievable now
Haters acting crazy cuz i switched up my style
Lady Dae be doin her thing on the mic
Just because i'm independent dont mean i am dike

Turn it Up!:
Don't be coming at me like you is fly
Crazy a** idiots be asking my why
Because i can, you can just ask Nyte
If you dont out my face be expectin a fight

Get Low Daesy
I from the midwest i aint from the south
But we know how to make ya shut ya mouth
Just a stare nothing need ta be said
If that dont work we put a bullet in ya head

Turn it up!:
Just be cause i got attitude and i got a good phase
Everytime i speak you can feel the blaze
I dont need protect i dont carry mase
I just get a 40 oz and smash ya face

 

[Nyte]

:YES:Ok, can we switch it up?

I mean it's a good song and all but there much more than this.
Sorry if I sound like an ass but I don't like having one format to rhyme on.

 

[Nitz]

maybe we should have people jump in with ANY song.. and remix it... then if anyone else wants to remix that song..; can do it, or they can remix another song..?

 

[Daesy]

Sound good. The only reason i did it again was the first one i did was ok...and i had to do another one better. You first Nyte.

 

[Nyte]

Check this out..

I'm a Renegade
Gettin' laid in the shade, I'm the ****a you paid
to keep ya foot out the grave.
Paved the way with the tracks I made.
if you never heard then get a hearin' aid
You can't deminish my spirit
My lyrics is lemonade, they're minute made
I made em' to listen, they come in an instant
like ya chick when I'm in it.
Won't stop til' I finish, Playa stop wit the trippin'
Cuz I box with biscuit, point blank range.
like my glock just kissed em' *Smooch*

Silly but hey, I'm gettin' warmed up...

 

[Nyte]

from the N to the Y to the T and E
there other mutha****a can put it down like me.
Search the mountain tops to the deep blue see
From the L.A county to the N.Y.C
I stay runnin' track like a damn athele
when I rap to the beat I bring it back the streets
I ain't talkin' 'bout car, it's nothin' 'bout Gs
you, know the boy got his hat to the side like Meth
and i'll distroy these fakaz 'til my last breath
Because the kids like Jay(-Z), he's not for play.
I will end your career by the end of the day.
Im from the dirty dirty, but not from the A
I'm a grownass man, I'm not here to play
So if ain't sayin' the best, stay outta my way!