This is something that i made for a game and i would like for everybody who can read it to reply on what they think about it. Good or bad.
Key--this the the key to help you out in reading it
( ) = Movie
[ ] = Game Play
“” = Character Voice
8 = link to next 8
Missions II: Welcome Home Party
Fades out and then back in to a Cul-de-sac with a group of guys standing outside your house
[sneak around the back of your house to encounter two more guys]
[grab rock on the ground][or go up to fist fight two men with guns] your choice
[throws rock at one head knocking him down][other one becomes startled and looks around] hopefully by now you were smart enough to hide behind the broken down rusty car in the ally way
[rush out to attack the other] After a few punches and kicks you get the gun out of his hands.
[fight some more]
You should easily win
[guy gets knocked out and falls to ground]
hopefully you were smart enough to grab the gun
[lock-on aim and kill both men]
[go through the back door of your house]
[Walk upstairs]
[go to dresser and pull out sniper]
[Head to roof of house] If you were smart you would stay hidden
(guy runs from the back of the house and informs leader that the others were dead and you got into the house)
“Come on boys! Give him hell to pay!”-Leader of the group
[men open fire on the house door and windows]
It will take up to three shots anywhere to kill the leader
If you were smart and stayed hidden you could get a good head shot off on him
[shoot leader]
“UP ON THE ROOF!”-gang member
[group shoots up at the roof]
[go down the first floor of your house]
[aim out the window and shoot the boss again]
“He went back inside”-gang member
[group shoots inside]
[go up to the roof]
You find out that two gang members are shooting on the first floor and two are shooting at the roof.
The leader is no where to be seen.
[Take out the four men]
“I’ll get you again!”-Leader of the group
[runs out from behind a car]
[runs away]
You now have to scope on him and shoot him before he escapes.
[zoom in and shoots him in the back]
To end the mission you have two ways you can go. You can go through the house and out the front door or climb down from the roof.
[goes to the edge of the house and climbs down the drain pipe]
[walks over to the leader of the gang]
(“So the great ghost killed me the leader of the Halse. How do you feel?”-leader)8
8(“Pretty good. It helps me feel…on top of things.”-your character)8
8(“Just know that because I die today, all of hell will break loose on the city. Soon it will.”-leader)
Once again I hope you reply on what you think about it.
Key--this the the key to help you out in reading it
( ) = Movie
[ ] = Game Play
“” = Character Voice
8 = link to next 8
Missions II: Welcome Home Party
Fades out and then back in to a Cul-de-sac with a group of guys standing outside your house
[sneak around the back of your house to encounter two more guys]
[grab rock on the ground][or go up to fist fight two men with guns] your choice
[throws rock at one head knocking him down][other one becomes startled and looks around] hopefully by now you were smart enough to hide behind the broken down rusty car in the ally way
[rush out to attack the other] After a few punches and kicks you get the gun out of his hands.
[fight some more]
You should easily win
[guy gets knocked out and falls to ground]
hopefully you were smart enough to grab the gun
[lock-on aim and kill both men]
[go through the back door of your house]
[Walk upstairs]
[go to dresser and pull out sniper]
[Head to roof of house] If you were smart you would stay hidden
(guy runs from the back of the house and informs leader that the others were dead and you got into the house)
“Come on boys! Give him hell to pay!”-Leader of the group
[men open fire on the house door and windows]
It will take up to three shots anywhere to kill the leader
If you were smart and stayed hidden you could get a good head shot off on him
[shoot leader]
“UP ON THE ROOF!”-gang member
[group shoots up at the roof]
[go down the first floor of your house]
[aim out the window and shoot the boss again]
“He went back inside”-gang member
[group shoots inside]
[go up to the roof]
You find out that two gang members are shooting on the first floor and two are shooting at the roof.
The leader is no where to be seen.
[Take out the four men]
“I’ll get you again!”-Leader of the group
[runs out from behind a car]
[runs away]
You now have to scope on him and shoot him before he escapes.
[zoom in and shoots him in the back]
To end the mission you have two ways you can go. You can go through the house and out the front door or climb down from the roof.
[goes to the edge of the house and climbs down the drain pipe]
[walks over to the leader of the gang]
(“So the great ghost killed me the leader of the Halse. How do you feel?”-leader)8
8(“Pretty good. It helps me feel…on top of things.”-your character)8
8(“Just know that because I die today, all of hell will break loose on the city. Soon it will.”-leader)
Once again I hope you reply on what you think about it.
