The king of Bandits

[Jing]

His sweeping smile can steal your heart
His creeping style from finish to start
His slowly stepping type of dance
Can take it's will without a chance

Thieving what he wills to take
Leaving nothing in his wake
Heeding all but no one's call
The king of thieves can take it all

Every little tiny thing
Cannot escape the bandit jing
No one is to big to fall
The king of thieves can take it all.

 

[Lalaith]

.... wow.... *long pause* lol.

That was awesome. I think I've read it at least 5 times and I'm sure I'll read it again. lol.

It's great and so... cool.

Brilliant!!

More, more... I want to read more. ^^

 

[Katsu]

...Jing..its wonderful, you were right. I absolutely love it...your such a good writer..I really think you have a good chance in the writing world.