The March Of The Damned

[Jing]

A thousand people lose control
Another lot of hopeless souls
It's seems there's nothing i can do
But watch from shadow, save the few

I only wish to lend a hand
And save you from this horrid land
But lest you lend your ears to me
Your eyes are shut, you cannot see

If only one would hear me out
And see what this was all about
Then maybe they would understand
Maybe they would leave this land

But las they turn to what they know
For where they don't they dare not go
If only they could see through me
If only they could truly see

They follow like children and never turn back
I can only hope that they change their track
For where they head is all their vote
Listen not to me, that's all i wrote.

 

[Lalaith]

Wow...

Yeah, I think I was possessed by the reading spirit, lol. But that's good, I guess.

Anyways, I really like this one... hey, I'll have to pick a fav one of these days.

But... what was I saying... Ah, I know. I liked it a lot. Especially this:

I only wish to lend a hand
And save you from this horrid land
But lest you lend your ears to me
Your eyes are shut, you cannot see

Perfect!!

 

[Eternally Yours]

its great. I remember you saying you thought i wouldnt like it cause of whats it about. Well I like it alot cause well to me you can take it on both sides of religion...i dunno i feel like ive been the narrator and possible that hes reaching out too as well.