Winter Nights

[Jing]

A blanket whitens all around
Bringing snowy frozen ground
Leaving all to freeze to death
Cold enough to see your breath

It's colder than it was before
And warmth is hard for you to store
So will you cuddle closely please
And keep me warm as not to freeze

The closeness of our bodies touch
Is warm enough to be my crutch
To keep me from this dying air
Yet keep me knowing you are there

I wish the snow to never stop
I not would let the blanket drop
Keeping all the heat inside
Hold me close and know i tried

 

[Lalaith]

Awww, that was cute and sweet and lovely... and everything. It was amazingly powerful in meaning and it was not sad. Even though it had a hint of darkness hidden in the cold.

Okay, I think you can do everything. ^^ You have a powerful mind and poetry runs in your veins freely. It's more than talent, it's... it's... I can't explain it in words. It's just like a power. You have the power of words.

 

[Katsu]

...oh dear Jing its beautiful..thank you...so very much, Lalaith is right...you have a way with words..and are just so very talented and kind. *hugs a billion times.*
...danke..so very much...